Stormreaver
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Re:Flyer Draft - 2008/10/08 03:44
I agree with the basics being fundamentally good. My thoughts would be to add the flash/color they talk about. Borders, Celtic knots, chinese dragons, something colorful. I also think the worded directions could be replaced with either action pics or script such as " Get away from the mundane! Live action role play.Be a monk, assassin, warrior, wizard from the 12 to 16th century. Most of all, make lots of new friends and have fun."
Just my two cents worth.
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